Tuesday, July 01, 2008

The Pillars of Perseverance

Somewhere along the way every aspiring writer comes to the realization that writing a novel is a lot of hard work. Hopefully, this realization comes early, and the writer accepts the fact and buckles down to the task at hand. We all have our own way of managing this. Some are real troopers, writing daily no matter what. Others prefer to write when the inspiration strikes them. Unfortunately, for most of us, that is too seldom and too short-lived to allow the creation and completion of a novel in anything less than several hundred lifetimes. Somewhere between the die-hard fanatic and the casual poseur, there lies a happy, healthy balance between life, work, family, hobbies, recreation, unexpected obligations, spur-of-the-moment getaways, etc., and the hard work necessary to complete a novel within a reasonable amount of time.

Oh, and did I mention that writers are also supposed to find time to read?

Yes, writers must be informed about what is going on the in the world. It is important to read about current events, to read up on history, to research topics relevant to our writing projects, and of course to read about writing in the never-ending effort to improve and expand our professional capacity and horizons. Finally, we must also read what other writers write in order to keep abreast of what is being published, and to find examples to learn from in the case of those writers who do a darned good job of it.

Currently, I am reading THE PILLARS OF THE EARTH by Ken Follett. It was one of Oprah's Book Club selections last year. It's a well-written and engaging story, the sort of novel that makes you wish you had written it yourself. It is always inspiring to find prose that is so clear, so expressive, so focused, and which sustains this high standard for hundreds upon hundreds of pages. This is the first novel I've picked up that happened to be on Oprah's list. I had a copy of it already in German, which I had begun reading but never finished. When I saw Oprah promoting it, I remembered wanting to get back to it and finish it one day, so I decided to get a fresh English copy and see how it was meant to be experienced in the original language. Some books read better in one language or the other, for some reason. I definitely like this one in English. Perhaps the fact that it is set in England has something to do with that.

In the Preface, the author writes about how he was inspired to write this novel but then put it aside. He came back to it ten years later and then took over three years to complete the process of writing and polishing it. I recognized my own struggles in his comments, particularly where he mentions that the reason he set it aside was because he realized he was not yet able to write it. When he started out, his writing skills were not sufficient for such an ambitious project. Follett also mentions that a longer novel is much more work than three novels of shorter length. I have also read in several blogs and articles on writing that a beginning writer might find it advantageous to start out writing a shorter novel, or a few YA or children's stories, in order to get the basics of storytelling down. Everybody has to start somewhere, and a shorter or simpler project helps you gain a foothold and advance your skills toward more ambitious projects.

I chose to take this good advice last year, when I shifted from adult-level novels to YA fiction. My intention was to write a few (3-5) YA novels as a way to simplify things and gain some practical experience (as well as tell some interesting and worthwhile stories!). So far, I have been very happy with that decision, and with my progress. This approach has been particularly helpful for me because I tend to make things more complicated the longer I work on them. It's happening even now with my current project, the JASPER story. As the novel winds into the third act, it should become more focused, more driven, the momentum increasing, the expectation rising, a clear sense emerging that all that has gone before has led to this moment and that this moment is inextricably leading toward something, and not just anything, but something which was ordained from the start, and which will reward the Reader with a gratifying pay-off (and reward me, too, by the way -- I also enjoy the thrill of seeing the story pull together and end well). Nonetheless, when everything should be clear, I find myself constantly seeking new twists, new surprises, the unforeseen shift that will make the Reader (and me) gasp with surprise and awe. I still seek a deeper significance, a way to draw out the themes, a profundity that frankly oversteps the requirements or the expectations of the genre. I need to remind myself that it is only a story, and that I must finish it, and just accomplishing that much is already accomplishing more than I have accomplished previously: I have yet to send a manuscript out the door!

A work like PILLARS inspires me to carry on, to keep things in perspective, to remember that other writers have passed this way, too, on their way toward meeting their personal goals. As Follett writes in his Preface, we must write the sort of stuff that we're good at, that rings true according to our unique talents. It is sound advice to start small, acquire the skills you need, and then carry on until you reach your ultimate goals. There are many stories within us, many great stories just waiting for a chance to be written. They will be, if we persevere.

Wishing all aspiring (and published) writers progress toward their goals,



Wynn Bexton said...

Adrian, this was an excellent posting. I really enjoyed and got a lot out of reading it.

J.A.S.ZI. said...


I really must concur with Wynn Bexton. This was an inspiring posting. It really motivated me to finish my project. I'd be honored if you checked out my blog and critiqued my novel.


Adrian Swift said...

Wynn and JASZI,

thank you both for your kind words.

JASZI, may I call you "Jazzy?" Your concept really stunned me. I think you should not post your novel online as you write it because it is very marketable as a thriller IMHO. I read only the first 2-3 pages worth and was quite impressed. With relatively minor editing, that portion would be ready to send out the door.

I owe someone else a critique, who has waited patiently for far too long for my humble feedback. I'll follow through with that first, then get back to you with a few suggestions.

Please ignore your cares about the story or the writing of it, if you have any, and write away! Dig in and set it in motion and don't stop writing until you've written "THE END". Seriously. Do it.

If you haven't already, I suggest drafting some sort of outline or list of major events in sequence, to help guide you and keep you on track. Thinking about the story in detail before you write makes a huge difference. Keep notes of events, names, etc., to refer to, and update as you go. You can always change things, but you benefit from having something tangible to work with (at least, that's how it is for me).

Best wishes all, especially the ever-patient SM (I'll be contacting you privately very soon, promise),


scott said...

Yes, you are correct that I am ever-patient, and surprisingly, still here! To be honest, I haven't thought of that story in a few months (though your thoughts are still completely valuable, and I can't wait to here them!), so soon will be a prime time to look at it anew to shape it into something better.

My muse lately has been something new, a prequel to that series I've spent the past two years planning, and ironically enough, as you mention in this post, a wonderful exercise in exhibiting freedom in exploring the ways to write a first novel. I come now from a rather successful and inspiring session of writing (3500+ fantastic words! Is that how other writers judge their productivity?).

Best of luck to you in your writings, your summer, and your critique of Jack and Todd. ;)

Debra Young said...

Great post, Adrian. By the way, I have Pillars of the Earth and I've been holding off starting it because it's the kind of book I'd fall into to complete distraction. d:)

Ellyn said...

My friend, I think you've just managed to save my writing. I've been trying to write this difficult character-based story, and getting all depressed about it. And then I googled "Persevering with a novel," and found this.
I'm going to put my baby aside. It's hard, but I will. And I'm going to write something different. Something fun. Something to get my experience up. I know this is an old post– but I just have to thank you.
So, thanks so much for that.

Adrian Swift said...

Ellyn, you're very welcome. Whether and "old" posting or a new one, if it helps, then I'm very happy. Best wishes to you as you shift gears and find another route to your long-term goals.