tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25637356.post5465393226393334945..comments2021-08-30T04:57:34.441-05:00Comments on Chronicling the Novel: Novel Description CompletedAdrian Swifthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03531355795873701197noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25637356.post-51388653706291635552007-07-03T07:54:00.000-05:002007-07-03T07:54:00.000-05:00Romance Writer,thanks for your comment. Yes, ther...Romance Writer,<BR/><BR/>thanks for your comment. Yes, there is an attraction between Willa and Faxon that is immediate. I did not fully develop the romance aspect in the basic description of the story, but there is plenty of room for it. I opened the door to it, and individual writers can develop that more fully as they see fit.<BR/><BR/>I'll consider whether to add more about their relationship in the description, or leave it as-is. If I develop it further, it would be to tie their relationship in to the process by which Willa figures out what she needs to know in order to do what she needs to do by the end of the story. In other words, have Faxon play a more direct role in helping her reach her potential, challenging her along the way. This is already suggested, but the connection could be made plainer. On the other hand, leaving it up to the individual writer to work it out would allow writers to develop the characters' personalities and manner of interaction in a way that works best for them, while still following the main suspense plot.<BR/><BR/>I agree that different aspects of the story can help draw in different types of readers and writers. It is a fantasy story, but there is also romance, and magic, and fight scenes/battle scenes, etc.Adrian Swifthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03531355795873701197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25637356.post-51036508325888045602007-06-30T11:02:00.000-05:002007-06-30T11:02:00.000-05:00I don't really read fantasy but if the story is wr...I don't really read fantasy but if the story is written well I will give any novel a try. <BR/><BR/>Is there any romance, even undertones of it, between Willa and Faxon? Cause that would also bring in more readers.<BR/><BR/>Best of lucky with PWP.RomanceWriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14920489469191764147noreply@blogger.com